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luc ⋆ ˚。⋆୨୧˚'s avatar

so youre OBVIOUSLY going to write what happens next. right.

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Mimi Milligan's avatar

😭😭😭 please make a part two

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Chloe Calvert's avatar

This is the best short story I’ve found on here yet!

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Jonah's avatar

Easiest read of my life!

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Chimdi Oluchi's avatar

absolutely loved this, especially after just reading Bad Date

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khayla's avatar

came from tiktok cause i’m obsessed w your videos and i had no idea you’re a fellow writer!! am blown away by your pen… bingeing the rest of your posts NOW! (it also never occurred to me to post fiction on here?? how fun!)

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Sandra Miksa's avatar

Your writing is so crisp Isabel.

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Jackson Johns's avatar

I enjoyed this. Some of the descriptions were really delightful in a "follow the breadcrumbs" way. I am simultaneously frustrated by and completely understand why the conflict between the couple is left unsaid, because it doesn't actually matter and yet I so wish it did for some reason.

Is a lack of self-awareness a masculine trait and is being paralyzed by too much of it a feminine one?

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Carrie's avatar

Enjoyed it :)

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Sandra's avatar

Sooo beautifully written

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Josie Lekkas's avatar

This is beautiful

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