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Denise Fedoruk's avatar

Was he ever really there?

Your poem echoes in my soul.

Shelley Isabel's avatar

“I do not miss your alarm—

that thin scream of morning.” Last line made me feel a thin scream in mourning too.

AmorousAnomalies's avatar

i really love your choice of wordplay!!

Jennifer Irwin's avatar

Beautiful and painful all at once.

Ilya Kharkow's avatar

It made me feel that weird kind of loneliness you get when you’re with someone. But right now I’m alone in my apartment.